The images you created here with your words was just haunting. I was hooked and wanted more. The flow was great and the rhymes did not seem forced. So well done. *5/5*

Though a cliche topic you pulled it off nicely. Really deep and powerful which created such a depressing image acros my mind. I loved the haunting and chilling effect you painted into the atmosphere really well done. Nice flow within this one. Keep it up ~Mel