by xxSuicidalxx Oct 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Screams |
by Melpomene
This poem was really simple but I believe it portrayed alot of emotion. It was nicely written holding such sadness within each word. I liked the short lines they were really effective though the flow seemed to lack a touch at the start but got better futher down. Well done none the less with this piece. I truely enjoyed it. ~Mel |
by Blissful
Oh wow this was chilling. I could just envision everything you spoke of and the emotion was easy to relate with. |