Oh wow this was chilling. I could just envision everything you spoke of and the emotion was easy to relate with.

"Screams fall on deaf ears"
^amazing.

Well Done *5/5*

This poem was really simple but I believe it portrayed alot of emotion. It was nicely written holding such sadness within each word. I liked the short lines they were really effective though the flow seemed to lack a touch at the start but got better futher down. Well done none the less with this piece. I truely enjoyed it. ~Mel