by xXxemzxXx Oct 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Why do you judge me |
Damn, that was deep, truly deep emotions. A lot of good flow! U are good poet!!! |
by Nix
Very honest poem, you expressed your feelings greatly and it is a hard topic to write about. Honestly, I don't want to offend you, but I personally don't like this piece too much. |
by Blissful
This was filled with true emotions and I could truly feel the hurt and pain. I do think it could have flowed better and the last sentence kinda of threw me off. All in all it was a good poem. *4/5* |
by Kyle
Wow...i could feel the raw emotions in this poem! great job and nice flow. =) |
by xxSuicidalxx
Love it! Very simple but flowing with emotions....well written and expressed well too.....oh, yeah, and thanks for the comments on mine!!! :) |