Hey i really like this poem iiht is really gud and as yu sed to me i know what yur goiing thru and how you feel iiam chez btw oh and if you want to speak more add my msn...

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Very emotional and lovely poem. I like the word choice. It is cohesive and coherent. Both lexically and poeticlly good poem :) 5/5

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Love it! Very simple but flowing with emotions....well written and expressed well too.....oh, yeah, and thanks for the comments on mine!!! :)
Keep writing!

Wow...i could feel the raw emotions in this poem! great job and nice flow. =)

This was filled with true emotions and I could truly feel the hurt and pain. I do think it could have flowed better and the last sentence kinda of threw me off. All in all it was a good poem. *4/5*

Very honest poem, you expressed your feelings greatly and it is a hard topic to write about. Honestly, I don't want to offend you, but I personally don't like this piece too much.

Damn, that was deep, truly deep emotions. A lot of good flow! U are good poet!!!