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by Lenny Oct 27, 2007 category : Life, society / other
Oh frightening lover Typing taunts of affection Will you be gone? When the dark one comes. Orbiting your heathen spiral My mind steals glances And ever yet wonders Where will you be? When the dark one comes. Piercing scriptures and kindling ashes My predator lashed Flickering tongue to taste me But will he desist? When the dark one comes. When the black raven Circles with cruel shadows And fire consumes the gates of pearls Will the frightening lover Cast stones at him? Blackening stones when The dark one comes.
by Eclipse
Its a good poem, but I found it very dark. Which isn't a bad thing at all. I did enjoy reading it - thats a fact!
by Drew Gold
See i know, see i see. this is what we are, this masterpiece. ending was explosive, yea it was all really good