Awww...that is so sad. I hope you feel better....this poem flowed with emotions, and i could actually feel your pain....beautiful job on this! Hope you feel better!!!!!
5/5

Personally when i read a poem like this i dont really no wt 2 say...i mean the poem is the best ive read yet, but to say great poem feels weird...as if im telling you to try again......so basically i think your really talented and i love this poem, but PLEASE DONT TRY AGAIN (not my choice but your life is more important than how it feels right now) hope you are happier :)

I know how you feel and you would think failing once would put you off but i keep running at the door to my life trying to force it shut...
lighter note: GREAT poem looks like you have finished something and won my praise!!!