This is a very spiritual piece...beautiful!

Wow, I love this poem! It is so great, somehow mystical from the beginning to the end, every stanza is great. You did great job with rhymes, too.
Truly excellently written poem.
Keep up!

This piece was really beautiful creating such an eerie effect over the atmosphere. I loved the word choice they were powerful and portrayed a dark yet elegant effect. Well done. Loved it. ~Mel

I love this...this is so beautiful and written with such elegance and beauty.

The message behind the written words is wonderfully portrayed, and that ending..wow..just beautiful!

I loved this poem. It's written amazingly. Keep up the great job. 5/5

A great poem, very well written 5/5

This was written very well. The rhyme scheme is good and the flow smooth and easy. There are some great images and meanings here.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Dang that's some really dark stuff. It's well written. 5/5
-vino

I love this poem is excellent and very well written
I love the choice or wording used throughout the poem to!
5/5 Your a brilliant writter!