I won't forget you

by waiting 4 some1   Oct 27, 2007


Knowing I will see your face I used to wake up everyday
Since your smiles always made my day
But now you are no more here
I can only see you in my dreams
Your name was my only song I used to sing
Your voice was my only music I loved to hear
And your breath was my favorite tone
So where did you go and left me alone?
I never thought you will disappear very soon
I never thought I will lose you, my bright moon
I never thought you will disappear one day
I never thought I will hear "sorry, I can't stay"
I was planning to win your friendship step by step
I thought I had time but our time was skipped
I still can't forget the first time we met
When I got lost in your dazzling eyes
I still can't forget the first time we met
When we shook hands and gave me those smiles
You think I will forget you but I will not, even if I tried to do
How come I will forget someone that in my dreams I couldn't do?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sunater

    Great^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Nice poem, i love reading this sort of poetry so sweet so nice so kind.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    I read some of your other poems but this ones my favorite so far...maybe you should show it to the girl its about it might win her over ^_-

    *^*crow*^*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi there!
    I know you want ppl to help you so here it comes:
    -you made a mis-spell it should be: even if I tried to do ( instead of tired to do)
    - the last sentence I would chance to:when even in my dreams there is always and only you
    You are free to use or ignore my advice it's a great poem anyway.

    Take care,

    5/5 sis

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