by katie Oct 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You see the tears in my eyes you all laugh as i just cry you do not no what i have been through so i look deep in your soul and tell me true was this your goal to take a happy Little and kill her hopes and dreams to me thats what it seams so i will sit here and wounder why u would make a sad girl cry |
by Amy
Katie, it's me! i totaly love your poem! dont forget to write more! |
by Amy
Wow! this poem is cool! I Love it! you sound like you could be a real poet! Keep it up!!! |
by Dark89
I love your energy and feeling but please use sentence ending marks for instance comma,period etc. beside that true feel your energy keep it up. hit me back any time you ok. |