True story
by katie Oct 27, 2007
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I tell you that i love you u say I'm just a kid i say ill always hug i no that you will hug back i try to under stand you but your to locked up in side i try to say i love you again you say i like you but to love you is a sin so you leave me her to sit and cry and think that you are right that age in between us so i will sit here with tears in my eyes but i guess that the one how loves is the one who cry's |
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16 years ago
by Mister 47
It is a great story you know , bt it lack some ponctuation
but in all i can understand waht you meant really
and i can realte
good story -
16 years ago
by Abu3li
Nice as a start
good luck -
17 years ago
by Amy
Hey katie. its me, Amy!!!
loved the poem, but try to add some punctuation. besides that, your doin great! see ya in scool!!!
