Comments : True story

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    Hey katie. its me, Amy!!!
    loved the poem, but try to add some punctuation. besides that, your doin great! see ya in scool!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Nice as a start

    good luck

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    It is a great story you know , bt it lack some ponctuation

    but in all i can understand waht you meant really

    and i can realte
    good story