Good flow, actually the flow was brilliant. I always find poems on this topic are a bit cliche and this one was i am afraid yet you did a good job with it.
Sweetie, life does get better, suicide is not the way to help yourself, and i am sure deep down you know that. Need to talk anytime, I am here.
Love Tara-Kay
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The title really captured my attention and the poem was overall a joy to read. The pace was great and the emotion real..well done *5/5*