Wow, this piece is deep. You put your self in to it and wrote it excellently. I enjoyed in beauty of your words, very emotional and sad poem. You described your feelings amazingly and painted very vivid and impressing picture with them. This piece has very unique and complex tone, atmosphere that you created is very captivating.

Powerful, powerful, powerful... It seem that you mastered dark poetry lol.... no, seriously, this is absolutely amazing and endlessly effective, with captivating, dark imagery and atmosphere.
My favorite stanza is:

-Facade footsteps in the silent air,
trailing whispers of abundant voices.
I understand there is nothing there,
but my hectic dementia seem endless.-

I love the wording in this piece, absolutely brilliant!
Keep writing!
5/5 from me