Sad reality of life, good poem

Excellent in its brevity

Fran,
This is a disturbing reality for a lot of people, myself included. This write though it is short has so much power in it's voice. If only all would heed to the advice in this. Great write...5/5

I really hope this is not an anecdote. I liked how picturesque this piece sounds at first, and the sudden switch shocked me. The fact that this piece is so short works in it's favour as the few words really hit us. Excellent work.

I know I commented on this one before. Still stands out

Well to anwser ur question i personally think there is NO love in a punch! lol well i just came to say nice write! 5/5 always
Kate~

Made me wince and shiver and feel all too sad, but how true, no winners on either side, see it all too much in my job role, i wrote a poem called My Man, about DV too, weel put, xp

I really liked this one as I can relate to it because I've had to pick up the pieces when my sister was hit by her ex partner. I hate the topic but love the poem. Well written and very true. No love is in a punch, 5/5. Em

Very powerful piece in little words.. And an all too true reality as well. Well written