This is truly powerful... It isn't what I expected when I first saw the title which is great, I love when writers surprise me with unique pieces.
Whole poem is effective and excellently written, very deep, too.
I like the rhymes and great flow that you created.
I can't chose my favorite part, this is absolutely great from the beginning to the end.
Keep up!
5/5 from me, truly deserved.

Again a nice piece i prefer your work when its in rhyming pairs like this one

Well done

5/5

Gary.