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  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    Nice

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Nice word picking. I love it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Youre a very good writer, But I cant relate and don't find your taste in writing interesting (PERSONALLY) but you mix words together well =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Robbyn

    Nice images i really like this poem your feelings are really clear nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Kool. i like it

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow awesome,fantastic wonderful idk out standing everything is great and worded fantastically :) :) I love love loved it great job :) 5/5