I like this poem. I like the message behind it and the journey it takes to get you there. What I dont like is the way it is set out. It looks like a lot to read and you can easily lose where you're at. Doesnt make easy reading. I like the wording just not the way its set out.

Love the poem but agree with the last person just fix the layout andit will look alot more inviting to read. Great work!=)

I'm not good with layouts...any ideas?