I don't know how you do it, but when I read your poems, I always have to think twice, about the true mening, and even then I'm not interely sure that I understand it correct.
Nomaly I have no problems at all understanding what I read.
I see some of your poems like a challenge (I gladly exept).
Please keep on writting.

Wow, you did fantastic job with rhyming, it is so original and interesting. Whole poem is very deep and it holds so many meanings, I love it, you wrote it on truly excellent way. Short but powerful, well done!