Here's your comment. :) |
-please...don`t tell me you love me- repetition of this line is very effective and it leaves great impression. |
Wow, this is an awesome peom... really touching... i love how u can put how it just feels in words... beautifully written... well done... |
by Boy
Pain has enveloped my soul`s desire |
Wowwie.... |
by Coco
This brought tears to me eyes as i read it....so very powerfull....so emotional....from the heart....simply amazing..i can relate to this poem so much...5/5 |
by Tiffany
"promises made but now ignored" |
I know I've said this to you before, but how do you reach into my soul and put my feelings into your poems? I know this is not about my life, but it very well could be.. and I'm sure very many people can relate to it in one way or another. |
by Melpomene
The repetition of that certain like really created something beautiful within my heart. This poem held alot of emotions which tempered with my feelings while reading it. The title was great I loved it because even from that I could feel the sadness. A gorgeous poem. ~Mel |
by Sherry Lynn
I was going to be like Ann Marie and simply say "Here is your comment" but upon reading this I felt as though I was about to choke up in tears myself. |
Nicely written poem , interesting flow, good rhyme ! |
by HOLLY ARMER
I'm sure it's already been said, but here it is anyway. |
Im speechless this poem was amazing |
by katie
I loke your poem its very good |
by Natalie84
This is my favorite ever from you. It flowed so easily and truly made me feel the power of what you were saying! This is an awesome write my friend!!! So nicely done! |