Whispers

by my demons   Oct 29, 2007


When i close my eyes i hear them
whispers of my doubts
halting my growth
holding me still

When my eyes are open feel them
movements of my fears
making me weak
keeping me distant

when i dream i see them
horrors in my head
breaking my soul
leaving me void

when i die i pray they stop
my existence ends
the voices leave
i am free

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  • 17 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Sounds to me when i read it like a cool, scary kind of prayer a kid would say in his bed. sorta like the good old "hush little baby, don't say a word"

  • 17 years ago

    by Oracle

    Very dark. reminds me of insanity, probably is. idk. but the way the images and emotions that fly off the words and into the mind is breahttaking. really well written.

    4/5

    :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Its an interesting poem.....
    Very interesting.....

    Nadia

    5/5