Sa, yet very amazing. Keep up the good work.

5/5

<mOnStRiiToS pRiiNcEsS>

Your emotion shows through and for someone like me, its easy to relate to the pain. i loved it. 5/5

A very good poem.... very descriptive and I like the title
:)

Nadia

5/5

This poem shows real maturity on your part as it shows the changes that you hav went through like the previous one through the seasons. I bet you would be a good Mahjonng player.

I'm not looking for the one who to win
Just want to back to place where I should been

first line cant be understood and second line should be
jUst want to go back to the place where I should have been

rest you ahve rhymed it very well
The thought of Crimson sky is great
Keep writing
5/5
Work a bit on your grammar
take care,
Roxiee

I love your poem it is disciptive and you put your emotion into it that is what makes a great writter keep up the good work
Amanda

That was deep.
I love poems that can change my mood, and this one could.
Keep it up.

Amazingly written, very emotional,
and easy to relate to.
great job =)

Wow...amazing poem. Loved it. Very deep and descriptive. And i love the title...its very unique! :) Keep up the good work!!!! 5/5

I really mean this when I say this, wow you have a very interesting and well written style to your work, I like this piece, actually I love it. I really love how it's very deep yet it doesn't drag on and on.
Auna

You do a really great job at rhyming like i said. Your flow runs along very smoothly. Excellent job!

5/5

The are some mistakes in grammer here. Although that, the choosing of words is unique here and the description of your emotions as crimson skies really passes the idea. Overall nice work 4/5

There are a few mistakes, but overall it was pretty well written, so I managed to look over the mistakes and appreciate the poem for what it was: beautifully thought out, and enjoyable to read.

Good job.