by Joshua Grider Oct 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Sometimes I breathe in air |
Now this poem is amazing. The flow was good and the rhyming wads perfect. 5/5 |
I like it, thanxs 4 ur comment on my1 but i didn't really understand it, but thanx anyways:P. |
by Blease
Great work |
by Nix
To be honest I don't like rhyming too much in this poem, because it is typical and it seems little forced. |
by Anthony
I can feel the emotion in it |