I can feel the emotion in it
I love the rhythm

To be honest I don't like rhyming too much in this poem, because it is typical and it seems little forced.
Other than that I like topic of this piece and you expressed your emotions on excellent way.
You also created good rhythm in it.

-I climb a-top a mountain high
but only to find myself let out a sigh.-

^This two lines are really fantastic and they adds very deep tone to this piece.

Great work

can see where its coming from

I like it, thanxs 4 ur comment on my1 but i didn't really understand it, but thanx anyways:P.
Really liked it though, 5/5

Now this poem is amazing. The flow was good and the rhyming wads perfect. 5/5

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