Letting you go

by Madddiii   Oct 29, 2007


I dreampt of you last,
why did i sent you away.
but i hide my thoughts inside,
to take out another day.

i want to move on,
to other things.
but i still love you,
after everything.

i here your lies,
i take it to heart.
with everything you say,
tearing me apart

I've hurt myself,
by hurting you.
my last goodbye
is what i have to do

you've turned me into someone,
i don't wanna be.
i miss your blue eyes,
and how they used to look at me.

this is my last goodbye,
i just want to let you know.
the new person that i am,
before i let you go.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Wwoooww I sooo love this poem And i can relate to everything you're sayin, except the part
    "Ive hurt myself by hurting you"
    Cause it's the other way around...
    I'm definitaly going to read more of your stuff
    (and thnks fr your message! really appreciate it:))
    x x
    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Wwoooww I sooo love this poem And i can relate to everything you're sayin, except the part
    "Ive hurt myself by hurting you"
    Cause it's the other way around...
    I'm definitaly going to read more of your stuff
    (and thnks fr your message! really appreciate it:))
    x x
    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is an awesome poem!!!! i few grammer things should be edited but the poem itself is wonderful. great word flow, good word choice, i can totally relate. and for 13 it is very good. good expression also. keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Whitney

    DUDE this is freakin Xcelent I love it....I can real8 so much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Used n Confussed

    This is really good,
    I like it alot!
    && alot of what you say i can relate to.

    But 'i here your lies' should be 'i hear your lies' Just so you know. but still an amazing poem!
    xxx

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