Really good..
well done =]

This is really good,
I like it alot!
&& alot of what you say i can relate to.

But 'i here your lies' should be 'i hear your lies' Just so you know. but still an amazing poem!
xxx

DUDE this is freakin Xcelent I love it....I can real8 so much.

This is an awesome poem!!!! i few grammer things should be edited but the poem itself is wonderful. great word flow, good word choice, i can totally relate. and for 13 it is very good. good expression also. keep it up.

Wwoooww I sooo love this poem And i can relate to everything you're sayin, except the part
"Ive hurt myself by hurting you"
Cause it's the other way around...
I'm definitaly going to read more of your stuff
(and thnks fr your message! really appreciate it:))
x x
Sarah

Wwoooww I sooo love this poem And i can relate to everything you're sayin, except the part
"Ive hurt myself by hurting you"
Cause it's the other way around...
I'm definitaly going to read more of your stuff
(and thnks fr your message! really appreciate it:))
x x
Sarah