This is a good poem. I also just wanna thnk u 4 voting for my peom. Its much appreciated. Kelly x x

A good poem
nice and simple
5/5
try to add something exciting which can attract readers

take care

Good jop!!great i vote you;-)

Hei, tnkx fr the votes and comen, u re a good writer too, keep up the work,

The way i can just picture it in my mind its really sad in a way but overall i liked it.

This is SO cute, and adorable, as well as very admirable and relatable. There's too many good words to describe your poem. It was absolutely beautiful and I could picture it clearly, and feel the love you put into it.
Awesome job :)
5/5

Aww that's really sweet! I love it :) Is that about anyone inparticular? ;)

Aww this was just beautiful and made me smile. I could sense how much you loved her. Well done *5/5*

Aww, I loved this poem very much. There was a little mistake and I hate to point it out, but overall it looks great. 5/5

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Awww short and sweet!!!
simple depiction of deep emotions
great stuff
5/5
-ali x

Aww that was so sweet keep it up!!!!!!!!

*anna*

Wow, that is like me and my best friend, thx 4 remminding me how much my relashonship w/ him has grown
& thx 4 ur comments on my poem "tell me"

Very sweet poem!

I like this poem... It's short but with emotion and i think that's what makes a great poem

May the every night bring these moments for u ! so that u will be no longer thirsty Ameen! I love this poem :)

Wow, Creapy, you pretty much read my mind, definitley showing my boyfriend this one, because i know this is exactly how me and him feel about eachother. Your such an inspiration, i cant get over it, 5/5 budd!

Aww this oen is cute

Very good , 5/5 ;)

This reminds me of someone...I love it..it's great! =] <3

This is a beautiful poem.
I wish I could have a night like that.
Amazing job!