by Jenni Marie Oct 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
{Hidden pain seeping through cracks |
by Midnight Sun
When I read this title I was immediately interested for I love that line. But as I read the poem it developed it's own being...it seperated itself from the famous title. And then it was beautifully brought together at the end. Because as you think about the last line more and more you start reflecting on the attitudes of the ppl described and they truly are acting every day to hide all the pain...and everyone does it and yet no one understands it fully. |
Wow this is amazing....its true. you can never tell who a person realy is. even if you've known them for 10yrs...there is stuff they hide.....i am one of them.... |
I had to add this on my favorite poems list, it's absolutly breathtaking. |
This poem is so stong and you have a lot of discription I give it a 5/5 keep up the good work |
by lost dream
I love it!! |