by Alliey May Oct 29, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My heart contains music |
I really liked the first two lines and the last two as well. But the way you didn't say the name was a little disappointing, it made it seem like the person was maybe someone you want to keep a secret, which doesn't go well with the general feeling of undying love for the person, do you know what I mean? |