Painting the world

by stillmomsgirl   Oct 29, 2007


Im painting a picture of trees with no leaves,
of standing in snow up to my knees
Im painting a picture of a girl and her dad,
laughing about the great times that they had
Im painting a picture of sun shining down,
making spring flowers grow up from the ground
Im painting a picture of unbreakable love,
as soft as a feather and beautiful as a dove
Im painting a picture of kids around the tree,
opening presents theyve been waiting to see
Im painting a picture of my mom and me,
Im painting the world the way I want it to be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Very well written... I loved the metaphor you used of painting the world, dont we all wish we could paint the world so it was perfect. Your imagery was also very good as you actually painted the ideas in our heads. Great Job!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    I loved it..<33*
    Another Great Job.. =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    This is well written. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    I loved it. it was beautiful. if only we really could paint the world like we want it to be. and, yes, The Coffeee Song was supposed to make people laugh. glad it worked on you.

  • 17 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Please Comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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