Comments : Painting the world

  • 17 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Please Comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    I loved it. it was beautiful. if only we really could paint the world like we want it to be. and, yes, The Coffeee Song was supposed to make people laugh. glad it worked on you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    This is well written. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    I loved it..<33*
    Another Great Job.. =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Very well written... I loved the metaphor you used of painting the world, dont we all wish we could paint the world so it was perfect. Your imagery was also very good as you actually painted the ideas in our heads. Great Job!
    5/5