Under The Radar

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 29, 2007


Title : Under The Radar
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Under the radar, maybe no one will find
Little lonesome place that used to be mine
A place for me to flow my crystal tears
Place to hide and stay away from my fears

Under the radar, I'm sure nobody knows
A humble place that I loved for the most
Where soul is born, then to see it grows
Up and down, but seem it never shows

Under the radar, I may have gone too far
Retarded and everything's gone awkward
A narrow place, but I'm living with star
And I'm proud since I could be that part

Under the radar, thought I've waited too long
Thought I was alone, but definitely wrong
She's there and she knows where I belong
For those feelings that feel so much strong

Under the radar, here she comes in my day
White and black united, turns to the gray
She's the answer of the times I've prayed
I'm invincible, but she looked me this way

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I loved this, there was so much emotion, i liked most of the rhmying, but some did seem a little forced, the flow was great, and the repition was also magnificent, great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This has to be my fave from the ones I read today! Just flawlessly beautiful. Each word held such an immense amount of meaning that savored each word while reading it. WOnderfully done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was really well done. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    And again another beautiful poem. I look forward in reading your future poems. Excellent vocabulary. Never stop writing! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Loads of emotions..
    loads of words that i can treasure so much

    love this one!

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