Comments : The Locket

  • 17 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    This is the most B A U T Ful poem ever.
    5/5 for sure.

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I actually felt like the last line was a little weak, maybe somewhat chiche, and sometimes that works for poems. For this one....not so much. There was a confusion of the emotions through it. The main statement was good, creative, but I would work on making the expression known drastically.