by Jenna Rose Kat Oct 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Falling on the ground so cold, |
It was good until it hit the pillow line. It sort of lost it from there. Pillow and mellow don't rhyme, and then I just wasn't very fond of the other lines. The soul to keep line wasn't bad though. Reminded me of a song. Anyways, I really liked your title choice. It was intriguing. The poem itself was all right. Not my favorite, but all right. I've I could I'd give it a 3.7, but I can't so I'll give it a four. |
by NottShawn
I can really relate to this one and this is very welll written keep up the good work 5/5 |
by Taylor
Love the imagery you use. |
by Polaroid
Great great great times a million gazillion lol |
by xxSuicidalxx
Like it! Very descriptive and uniquely written! Keep up the good work!!!!! 5/5 |