Like it! Very descriptive and uniquely written! Keep up the good work!!!!! 5/5

Great great great times a million gazillion lol
10/10

Love the imagery you use.
really well written:)

5/5 yet again

I can really relate to this one and this is very welll written keep up the good work 5/5

It was good until it hit the pillow line. It sort of lost it from there. Pillow and mellow don't rhyme, and then I just wasn't very fond of the other lines. The soul to keep line wasn't bad though. Reminded me of a song. Anyways, I really liked your title choice. It was intriguing. The poem itself was all right. Not my favorite, but all right. I've I could I'd give it a 3.7, but I can't so I'll give it a four.