by FridusBlueheaven Oct 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Title : I'm Tired Of Loving |
by Sweet lig
Ohh,, i never get tired of loving.. hehe well i love how describe all ur thoughts here seems very strong and very worded.. well,, i appreciate it because i believe that thru this it helps u to express those hardly words u cant express out inside.. great |
by Blissful
I loved the message you expressed here with your words. It was one, I'm sure, many can truly relate with. I do think the flow was a bit rocky and the rhymes seemed forced in some places but all in all, it was poem I enjoyed. Well done *5/5* |
You put a lot of emotion into this, i really liked it. Very sad in a way. Great job |
Wow, this is a sad poem =[. It's really good though. There was a couple of grammatical errors, but other than that, it's good. You express the feeling really well. Good job. 5/5 |
Hey this is a gr8 poem..keep it up..nice rhyme and the descriptive and emotive words u used were gr8..sorry for writin everythin in slang..its just quicker is all lol!! |