I'm Tired Of Loving

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 30, 2007


Title : I'm Tired Of Loving
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

I'm tired of loving, but I have too much care
Too much love inside but don't know who to share
Well, I'm not a coward and this is looked unfair
But when love has gone, is there anything to stare?

I'm tired of loving, coz I don't want to hurt
Well I must realize and stop talking my words
I'm no more vain but could I better after all
And it's not good to let anyone take the fall

I'm tired of loving, but too hard to deceive
I want to take it, but remember I should give
What's left of me is the feeling deep inside
But I'd rather forget it through darkest night

I'm tired of loving, don't tell me to do what I could
Well, you know that I don't have ability to be good
I'm just the man who'd do everything that he would
And he's forgotten about everything that he should

I'm tired of loving, I don't want to see her crying
I'm down too many times and now I'm stumbling
What I've said and done but I just keep denying
I'm done with loneliness, I'm tired of waiting

I'm tired of loving, pretend to be someone that I don't
Always being something that I never really want
I've tried to stop all the consciences, but seem they won't
Well, goodbye to my little love, now I'm moving on

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh,, i never get tired of loving.. hehe well i love how describe all ur thoughts here seems very strong and very worded.. well,, i appreciate it because i believe that thru this it helps u to express those hardly words u cant express out inside.. great

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the message you expressed here with your words. It was one, I'm sure, many can truly relate with. I do think the flow was a bit rocky and the rhymes seemed forced in some places but all in all, it was poem I enjoyed. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You put a lot of emotion into this, i really liked it. Very sad in a way. Great job

    5/5

  • Wow, this is a sad poem =[. It's really good though. There was a couple of grammatical errors, but other than that, it's good. You express the feeling really well. Good job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Hey this is a gr8 poem..keep it up..nice rhyme and the descriptive and emotive words u used were gr8..sorry for writin everythin in slang..its just quicker is all lol!!

    well keep it up
    tk cr
    breex