Wow beautiful piece. Really liked it! Lots of desrcpitveness and emotion throughout it. Flowed beautifully too....keep up the amazing work~ 5/5

Haha i love this poem....perfect really...

and thank you for recomending your poetry you're a very skilled writer

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Love it, its beautiful

Tis a very good poem fridus(Hope I Spelled That Right) i liked the flow and the grammer seems perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Wow, that was really good! Nothing else to add.

This is another favorite. especially the first, and last two stanzas i love. it really brings out the strain and toll love can take on a person, something i just had to experience today. But never give up on love. thats the key, and one day, you'll no longer be tired, but renewed.

Amazing,
great write.
i love it.
very deep and emotional.
very descriptive as well
awesome work <3

Nicely written,
we dont want to hurt someone else cuz we took the hardest hit in reality,,,,
keep on writin!

Hey this is a gr8 poem..keep it up..nice rhyme and the descriptive and emotive words u used were gr8..sorry for writin everythin in slang..its just quicker is all lol!!

well keep it up
tk cr
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Wow, this is a sad poem =[. It's really good though. There was a couple of grammatical errors, but other than that, it's good. You express the feeling really well. Good job. 5/5

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You put a lot of emotion into this, i really liked it. Very sad in a way. Great job

5/5

I loved the message you expressed here with your words. It was one, I'm sure, many can truly relate with. I do think the flow was a bit rocky and the rhymes seemed forced in some places but all in all, it was poem I enjoyed. Well done *5/5*

Ohh,, i never get tired of loving.. hehe well i love how describe all ur thoughts here seems very strong and very worded.. well,, i appreciate it because i believe that thru this it helps u to express those hardly words u cant express out inside.. great