It Shows On My Wrist--Can You Stop it?

by Lost in Life   Oct 30, 2007


Don't give up
i need your help
i scream silently
it shows on my wrists
i hold so much pain
turns and twists
i feel so ashamed
it shows on my wrists.

i feel you slipping don't lose grip
help me control my pain before I slip
out of my mind i am falling
save me, you are my calling
i feel it, deeper deeper deeper
the more pain i cause the more i get rid of
its hard to understand
the more scars the less pain
just don't judge me
just let me be.

let me be free
and not held down
by what you say
doesnt make me frown
just pisses me off and makes me sad
i need help so i wont be mad

can you help me and save me from myself
it will be hard but dont give up
i need your help
the screams i make so silent
shows on my wrist
for all the pain i hold
all the turns and twists
im so ashamed
it shows on my wrist

my eyes are a disguise
please dont check them too hard
they hide so many secrets
and all my pain i try to discard

can you see my pain
all of my shame
glance at my eyes i turn my head
you turn it back around
a tear rolls down my face
you see right thru me
you get a sad face makes me feel worse
you wipe it away but it isnt dry for long
you grab my hand hold me tight and strong
you are there to comfort me
but yet i still bleed.

it shows on my wrist
and deep in my eyes
can you stay with me knowing im made of lies
i don't lie to you i want you to know
i will try my best to let my true feelings show
i'll start by taking this razor off my wrist
but then my hand slips and it goes the deepest it has yet.
and i sit there looking at you crying
can you save me?
it shows on my wrist
can you save me?
you see it in my eyes
can you save me?
i love you
do you love me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Really in depth poem... very good though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Pisces Poet

    U are my only favorite author on this site...your poems have so much power and emotion...and believe it or not i understand everything you are saying and going through...becaus i go through the same thing.. 10+

  • 17 years ago

    by TAYLOR

    Wow! this one is really amazing :)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    I really like that poem. it has... significance 4 wat im going thru. hope it gets better 4 you... becuz it wont 4 me. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LiNa

    Not suicidal too are u?????? i liked this poem its me all over the place ive been in this spot before actually the same exact spot thats why i love this so much. great job.