"i don't lie to you i want you to know
i will try my best to let my true feelings show
i'll start by taking this razor off my wrist
but then my hand slips and it goes the deepest it has yet.
and i sit there looking at you crying
can you save me?"

I really like this part, and the whole poem was very well written. You spoke from the heart and that makes your writing so much more vivid. Loved it.

Wow! I could feel the weight and power of the emotions you put in there... A brilliant write... Great stuff... 5/5

Not suicidal too are u?????? i liked this poem its me all over the place ive been in this spot before actually the same exact spot thats why i love this so much. great job.

I really like that poem. it has... significance 4 wat im going thru. hope it gets better 4 you... becuz it wont 4 me. 5/5

Wow! this one is really amazing :)
5/5

U are my only favorite author on this site...your poems have so much power and emotion...and believe it or not i understand everything you are saying and going through...becaus i go through the same thing.. 10+

Really in depth poem... very good though!