Betrayel

by twistedlover   Oct 30, 2007


*Take a look around x2
Nothing but fighting
*Take a look around x2
Dont you come crying
*Take a look around x2

Cuz I, I do not dare deny
Betrayal in my eyes
You�re right here you Are destroying my life
And why Should I deserve I deserve to die
Another wasted life
You animal you locked in lies

*Take a look around x2
Dont come crawling back to me
*Take a look around x2
Betrayal far as I can see
*Take a look around x2

So cry while im about to die
The basic beast inside
The animal is locked up inside
And why should I deserve to die
Betrayals all on your tonight

Scream*Take a look around x2
Dont crawl back to me
*Take a look around x2
Youve had your shots you see
*Take a look around
Betrayals all I see

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    I like it!!
    its rele good!
    keep up the great work!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is an excellent song
    if it is one i mean
    heartache is truly
    your passion
    nice write
    5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is the downside of love right here, the betrayel that comes with it in almost everything relationship immaginable. But like I said before this will only make you stronger, heartache made me who I am today. 5/5 GG23

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Is this a song? i am just wondering
    because you had the x2 everywhere.
    i liked how you showed that betrayal
    is everywhere, and i couldn't see
    many problems in it. nice work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Interesting.... Is it a song?? and if so did you write it??
    Anyways It sounds good!

    *Take a look around
    Betrayals all I see

    Thats my favourite part in that
    Nice work!

    Nadia

    5/5

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