Interesting.... Is it a song?? and if so did you write it??
Anyways It sounds good!

*Take a look around
Betrayals all I see

Thats my favourite part in that
Nice work!

Nadia

5/5

Is this a song? i am just wondering
because you had the x2 everywhere.
i liked how you showed that betrayal
is everywhere, and i couldn't see
many problems in it. nice work 5/5

This is the downside of love right here, the betrayel that comes with it in almost everything relationship immaginable. But like I said before this will only make you stronger, heartache made me who I am today. 5/5 GG23

This is an excellent song
if it is one i mean
heartache is truly
your passion
nice write
5/5
kaila

I like it!!
its rele good!
keep up the great work!

<3 i love you silly