So cute! Great job Cindy and Ben.....Brings back lots of memories from childhood, as well as Halloweens past of my kids....

Hello to Cyntia and Ben,

You have painted a very vivid picture of Halloween. I liked the feeling it gave me while reading it, especially the last stanza with the fire place. I have one myself and I love to sit in front of the fire and look into the flames!

Best wishes to both of you,

Love, Ingridxx

Cindy and Ben, What a brilliant poem, brings back memories to many i am sure.
Flow was awesome and the wording was very well used.
Love always,
Tara-Kay
x

Brilliantly done guys!! My kids still love the fun of halloween but i think over the years its not like it used to be when i was a kid.

A bit different cindy, but tis very good, it has perfect flow and grammer, another 5/5 from me!!! keep them coming!!!

You guys seems to be seriously effected by the Halloween.... :o)
This is a cool poem, thats what i say when i get scared.

First collab between you guys and thats also a scary one....hhhmmmm....now thats what i call unique.

great work done, keep writing
all the best and take care

I've never been "Trick or Treating", but the way you described it here is exactly as I imagine it would be, wonderful imagery used here to bring to life the darkness and wonder of halloween.

A good collaboration is one in which you can't really tell where one author stop and the othjer takes over. This is written so beautifully written that your styles merge into one.

Very nice work.

~Pete.

Well I just be ..... Thought I had commented this earlier. Sorry.
Anyways,
I thought this was a wonderful collab, you two have done a very nice job of merging your words to create a beautiful image. Great Job.
Kay

Cindy, this is One of the best halloween poem i have read till date.A great collab, sure poem writing is a boon to your family :)

I love this collab. Very cute and festive. Well thought out and put together. Great job!!

Thats an awsome poem capturing the magic of hallowine, over here we dont see much as its nto really a tradition but reading your poem opens my mind to many posibilities of what a wonderful nigth it can be to watch the younger generation dress up and have fun like we all used to. Great poem guys xox sam