by Kristina Oct 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I've got bruises on this broken heart of mine |
by Gasttlee
It's passionate, heartwarming and beautiful. It's flow is spectacular. 5/5 |
Once again you've written a love poem straight from the heart and I feel your pain. The flow was great and the word choice as well - a couple lines are missing a word but other then that it was excellent - 5/5 GG23 |
by abcede
Way to go!!! keep it up, chica:) |
This is a really sad poem. I've been through something like this. The poem has good flow. 5/5 |