by Kristina Oct 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I find myself crying over you again, |
The sentiment is delivered well here in a great free flow |
by jescelle
"My heart is almost completely gone".... amazing line!!! great job!! |
by Lizaveta
Your style is original1 like it. and the emotions here are so strong, in every stanza, every line |
Another sad, but beautiful piece. The beginning really drew me in and caught my attention all through the poem. :] And I don't think I can choose a favorite stanza or a few favorite lines. A spectacular piece. :] 5/5 |
by Lucy
Sounds like a bummer...you seem like a pretty origional poet there |