Sad, but very amazing. It was a really good poem. 5/5

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Wow i'm kinda in the same kinda state so i love that i got to read this and know that i'm not alone:)

This is really a fantastic poem, I know the pain you feel with having a broken heart, but it will heel with time and you'll be that much stronger. Love although hurts bad everytime it falls apart, it's never worse then the first time. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

How I can relate. I've felt something like this before. 5/5

Wowow
this has so much emotion in it
and i can relate to that.
you described it so well.
it was awesome, loved it.
5/5

cindy

Love'd It:::: 5/5
I like your style of writing :)
and I would love it if you'd come check out my latest :)
thanks,
Raina007

Awww this is so gorgeous and so sad, you are an amazing poet. you deserve the best in life and i hope you get it all and more.ox

Sounds like a bummer...you seem like a pretty origional poet there

Another sad, but beautiful piece. The beginning really drew me in and caught my attention all through the poem. :] And I don't think I can choose a favorite stanza or a few favorite lines. A spectacular piece. :] 5/5

Your style is original1 like it. and the emotions here are so strong, in every stanza, every line
keep it up)

"My heart is almost completely gone".... amazing line!!! great job!!

The sentiment is delivered well here in a great free flow