Without you

by StormXclusive   Oct 30, 2007


Without you I am like a voice,
that cannot speak,
a word which makes no sound
a sentence which has no meaning.

Without you I am a watch with no hands,
A clock that has lost it's toc,
A world where time stands still

Without you I am a meal giving no appeal,
A drink that was never sweetened,
A bad taste coming from nectar.

Without you I am emptied,
My content is hollow,
a feeling that now only brings me sorrow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Nice poem. and nice use of metaphors and personification.

    -daniel

  • 17 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Wow! Like the comparisons in this piece. Good from beginning to end!
    *ME*