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by StormXclusive Oct 30, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
Without you I am like a voice, that cannot speak, a word which makes no sound a sentence which has no meaning. Without you I am a watch with no hands, A clock that has lost it's toc, A world where time stands still Without you I am a meal giving no appeal, A drink that was never sweetened, A bad taste coming from nectar. Without you I am emptied, My content is hollow, a feeling that now only brings me sorrow.
by Dan
Nice poem. and nice use of metaphors and personification. -daniel
by MyEscape
Wow! Like the comparisons in this piece. Good from beginning to end! *ME*