by MyEscape
I like this piece. It's sweet and simple, and from the heart. It's really good. I would suggest fixing the typos that the site put on it though. I know I sound crazy, but look it up on the site. It's got all kinds of weird symbols in it. |
I love this poem, it is so sweet!! |
by Pamela G
Very sweet and so cute. Lovely. |
Nice write, it feels like something I would write. So emotional and heartfelt. The only thing I would advice you to do on this poem is add punctuation. Punctuation is very important in poetry, it allows the reader to know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow of the poem. |