A superb poem in all sense, the meaning you have portrait with well choosen words is brilliant.So true to real life context, we all seraching for lost child within us.Loved this claasical write !

Take care
chavii.

I like that. I like it a lot. The vocab used made the imagery vivid. I agree with Chavii, we are all searching for that inner child...or have lost it in a sense, lost childhood, lost that freedom..but thats just my interpretation.

Very deep.
An enjoyable read.

Nice job.

Ah, loved this one. The words were well places to give the maximum effect and they maintained the tone the whole way through, nice job as always

"The child is long dead
And someone has taken his place
Using his name to progress
Lies the body on life's sardonic bed"

This is so emotional, this really makes me want to read more. I love how you started it, very strong. Great job.

"Sometimes the child tries to come out of the grave
He doesn't want to be a dead man's slave
But he needs to die; needs to die desperately "

Good imagery in this stanza, your words just flow so well. I like your writing style. its original and very well written.

"But, hope the child will born again
With his condor & all his graciousness"

I like how you ended this poem, which seemed to be sad, with some hope. Good job!

"The child is long dead
And someone has taken his place
Using his name to progress
Lies the body on life's sardonic bed"

This is so emotional, this really makes me want to read more. I love how you started it, very strong. Great job.

"Sometimes the child tries to come out of the grave
He doesn't want to be a dead man's slave
But he needs to die; needs to die desperately "

Good imagery in this stanza, your words just flow so well. I like your writing style. its original and very well written.

"But, hope the child will born again
With his condor & all his graciousness"

I like how you ended this poem, which seemed to be sad, with some hope. Good job!

Beautiful

An interesting poem. Good vocab used and a great flow. captivating good job

I love the flow to this one. It's great. I think someone can take many different meanings out of this one, and I love that about a poem.
Awesome job, and thanks for the comment. =]

I struggle with this question everyday. Is it right to be a kid again? Am I expected to be an adult all the time? I think to myself of how I can let my soul be free and enjoy life, and then just one the kid in me is about to jump out, I stab it and think about my bills. I loved it with all the meaning of the word. Thanks for a great read.

Really superb .... nice wording

The fresh air of innocence is gone
Love for the truth; that burning fire
Life becomes so narrow; mind's like mire
Agitated nights and broken torrid dawns

^^^
Love these lines...

There is a child within everyone that gradually dies, maybe with age, maybe with experiences. As soon as that child is exploited to the harsh venoms of the cozening and cunning world-the innocence demises and the blissful state of obliviousness shatters and mutates.

Amazing :)))
I loved it..esp the last line
deserves a five rate !!!
keep it up =)

Well done very deep and detailed writing good job keep up the good work! 5/5

Everyone has an inner child that becomes further trapped as age and experience build. The more tainted the person, the faster that child inside dies. It's sad to see that so many people seemingly willingly kill that inner child.

"Sometimes the child tries to come out of the grave
He doesn't want to be a dead man's slave
But he needs to die; needs to die desperately"

I liked that stanza a lot. It holds a lot of imagery and power. The child wants to be free to come out and play, but its suppressed and smothered.

God... such a depressing poem, but it's so good.

Keep up the awesome work.

But, hope the child will born again
With his condor & all his graciousness
He'll be back from death's vicious wilderness
And once again life will be pure & I'll be sane

This stanza really rocks...I liked it the most...
The whole subject of the poem is perfectly expressed...
Keep up the good work5/5..