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by playgroundreject Oct 30, 2007 category : Life, society / inspirational
Lonely and confused trying to find a way out clawing at the walls in my mind walls made purely of doubt i questioned myself i gave in to the game now im lost in this maze my sight clouded by shame Im weak and alone i stumble and i fall voices they mock me saying i never gave it my all i scream and i cry telling them all to go away but there mocking me they continue to stay i stand now... angered filled with pure rage the bitter look in my eye the same as a beast released from its cage i walk forward standing so tall determination in my eye refusing to fall believing in my self refusing to doubt i walk through this maze i've found my way out
by Black Heart Still Beating
This is really good. Grammar mistake, (SORRY!) In this stanza, i scream and i cry telling them all to go away but there mocking me <--**they're they continue to stay 5/5 **Brii.