Oh wow this was just beautiful. The love expressed here truly took my breath away. The imagery was captivating and the poem as a whole made me smile. I could truly feel the strong emotions you feel for this person. It was amazing .*5/5*

I liked this poem it was well written with lots of emotions, good job. My favorite line is "When I hear your name, I still get butterflies" I love how you get butterflies when you see someone you care about so much even after years. 5/5 ^_^.

I loved this! An extremely good write! You are so exrememly talented. Lots of emotions in this and it flowed wonderfully......amazing job, just beautiful. Keep writing! Look forward to more poems from you! 5/5

This is such a beatuful poem i love the way it was worded you did an amazing job itz such a wonderful read keep it up :) 5/5

--emz--

Really liked the expressing of emotions here. You combined good rhymes and metaphors with deep feelings. Nice work, keep it up 5/5

This is written excellently. The rhyming is perfect, as is the flow and the vocab. You created detailed imagery and I love this stanza, I could just see it so well as I read it.
'We walk on the beach I'm holding your hand,
My fingers they fill the gaps between yours,
Water crashes onto our feet, toes in the sand,
Together our love could conquer all shore's.'

The only little mistake was a punctuation, which is in this line;
'When we[']re together I'm truly blessed by grace,'
It just needs the apostrophy.

Well done on a sweet poem. 5/5 :]

Tammie

I really liked this poem it was really good

That's kinda corney lol... jk it's not. Great use of imagery, love it. 5/5

It was good. It came straight from the heart which is all that really matters. It was a well written piece. Nice work. 5/5 from me.

Awww. Such a sweet poem and wonderfully written. You portrayed such a beautiful love in this poem and expressed your emotions beautifully as well. The rhyming was excellent and the flow was flawless. I think many people want to find what you've described in this poem.

5/5

Good job && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Such a great poem. I gave it 5/5. This stanza especially has amazing symbolism and significance :

"The way your eyes shine, looking into mine,
Make the brightest summer stars look Grey,
And our love with time, just like a fine wine,
Will become sweeter with each passing day."

Comparing the quality of your love to wine, and saying that it only gets better as time goes on...I hope this poem is going to someone special.

That was beautiful!
my goshh.
so passionate!
and so deep in thought.
i loved it!

xx
Marissa.

Loved it. (-_-)

Beautiful opening, with each stanza thereafter getting better and better.

The imagery you painted in this is beautifully displayed, it created very vivid pictures in my mind, and I thought it was very pretty.

I adore the ending stanza, such a beautiful, fitting end, to such a wonderfully written piece.

Wow.... beautiful poem. I love read it.

Omg, this poem is AMAZING. it reminded me of someone... this is AMAZING.
(sorry it is)

I love your poem...it is really good..keep it up